to violin’s strings
their steps trace each others’ paths
they meet, roses bloom
~
frost disturbed
on the old long winding rails
trace left by passing train
.
For Carpe Diem # 364.
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to violin’s strings
their steps trace each others’ paths
they meet, roses bloom
~
frost disturbed
on the old long winding rails
trace left by passing train
.
For Carpe Diem # 364.
The 2nd haiku is particularly nice, wonderful, and the first very well done keeping to the theme..
Happy New Year Anmol … thank you for sharing this gorgeous duo with us all. That first one is very close to the first prompt, but that second is a masterpiece. Long time no see … You were missed …
There might be a few cinders to mark the passing of the train too, if it’s an old coal-burner.
Very nicely done!
This was lovely and refreshing to read.
Live them both, but I love the romance of the first one
Ciao
Pea
Glad you included the violin’s strings, as this is taut with metaphor.
The second one really took me to a railway station… very nice