Senryu

Wilted

faded pictures

wilted petals of a life

just memories

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4 thoughts on “Wilted

  1. This is very nice! I like the image it brings up… it’s how I feel when I look at old black and white photos or films. May I just say, though, that the “the” at the beginning seems completely unnecessary. There’s a feeling of something more to come, something incomplete in that little piece with the “the” starting it off.

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